Posted by: LucidMystery | March 8, 2008

Haiku

 Haiku (hī’kōō)–A form of Japanese poetry. A haiku expresses a single feeling or impression and contains three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, respectively.

A little over a week ago, I decided to brave public humiliation and enter a haiku contest sponsored by the English department. The nature of the contest would be face an opponent and read your haiku against theirs, the person with the best 3 out of 5 haiku advancing to the next round and face another person with five more haiku. Fate snickered at me when I was paired opposite Alec Volpe, last year’s winner. His haiku are mysterious and thought provoking. Mine are over-dramatic, whiny, or mildly humorous.

I should mention I wasn’t incredibly prepared to compete since I didn’t even start writing until 20 minutes before the contest, though I won’t claim that procrastination was the root of my defeat. With all that being said, I did enjoy writing them under pressure. It was a rush…a nerdy rush, yes…but still exciting.

Though I was by no means bummed that they all were not read aloud, I thought I would share my favorite ones that might have been read that night. (Actually a few of these I did read, I think, but oh well.)

Dawning

Awakening with

The horizon’s setting sun

A fiery passion

 

 

 

 Don’t Come Back for Five to Seven Days

Ice cream, Diet Coke,

Brownies, burritos, Cheetohs,

A PMS day

 

 

 Broken

Foolish girl, you are,

Blinded by the jaded heart

You wrought on yourself

 

 

 Nature

An ecosystem

The balance of life and death

Symbiotic truth

 

 

 Alone

A screaming battle,

All within my darkened head,

Someone please find me

 

 

 Call the Geek Squad

The fateful blue screen

That just destroyed my homework

I hate computers

 

 

 The World Around Me

Anthropogenic

War, disease, and slavery

Man-made or man killed?

 

 

 Booooo

The haiku goddess

Did not smile on me today

She mocked my efforts

 

 

 

Failing

The storm is growing

A downpour of pain, tears, and

Thundering anger

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Responses

  1. Everyone loved the P.M.S. one, though Dr. Gorman did point out that your three judges were all female….

    I was so proud of you! I’m glad you competed. I was impressed.

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  2. Very good written.

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  3. bleak harvest
    the rain fails to visit
    the rice field

    Like

  4. Please don’t be put off by haiku contests. Check our’s out, it’s for a good cause too. 😉

    Alan, With Words

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